Allyson Johnson

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Day One on the Caminho Portuguese- Porto to Barcelos

At Porto, the Caminho starts in front of the cathedral, looking out over the city. Here is where you pick up your empty Camino passport – filled with stamps from businesses along the way it might earn you a certification as a true peregrina. The symbol on the pylon is the official stylized scallop shell logo of the Pilgrimage. The arrow, of course, points the route, and within the small oval is the number of kilometers you have between you and your goal in Santiago. From one of many vendors about the place, you can purchase an actual scallop shell to hang on your backpack to let everyone know you are on the Way.

Following the advice of a Caminho Whisperer whom Michele consulted, we are taking the train through the industrial outskirts of Porto, and beginning our walk in Barcelos, a charming town about fifty kilometers along the way.

We are staying just across the river from the medieval walls and chapel of Barcelos, at the Top ‘Otel. This is a modern, sleek, brightly colored inn, whose only defect is a lack of elevators to carry us to our rooms on the top floor.

Barcelos is famous for its roosters, based on a legendary appearance of Saint James in support of a pilgrim falsely accused of theft and sentenced to hang. A medieval cross within the castle grounds illustrates the miracle.

The condemned man cries out to his judge who is eating a dinner of roasted chicken “As sure as I am innocent, that cock will rise and crow if I am hanged!” To everyone’s shock, the roasted cockerel did rise and crow, the judge rushed to the gallows and found that the pilgrim, though hanging, was not strangled: Saint James had appeared and supported his feet.

The man was cut down, the judge apologized, and the rooster became the symbol not only of Barcelos, but also of Portugal.

Walking the Caminho Portuguese: First, the Plan

When my long-time travel companion DM (see “Nepal” and “France” tagged entries) suggested we should do another walking trip together, I hit on doing at least part of the Portuguese Way of the pilgrimage to San Juan Compostelo’s cathedral in Santiago, Spain. My sister M and her husband B are permanent residents of Porto, Portugal, a popular starting point for the Portuguese Way, and they immediately signed on with enthusiasm.

The average age of the foursome is over 75, and all agreed that they felt no need to earn a Compostela – a certificate affirming that the pilgrim has walked at least one hundred kilometers along the Camino. We were inspired only by the desire to travel together in a way that would enable us to enjoy the countryside of Portugal and Spain on a path largely inaccessible to tour buses. We did enjoy getting validation stamps on our pilgrim’s credentiales, as the restaurants and auberges along the way vied to offer the most interesting stamps.  But instead of tracking miles and steps, Michele consulted with experienced Camino walkers to identify the most interesting and most scenic stretches along the Portuguese Way, including one stretch on a boat up the Rio Ulla to Padron. The quartet began in Porto on May 18, and used trains, buses, and taxis as needed to finish their Camino in Santiago on May 30. 

Rather than work with a tour group, M booked accommodation each night through Bookings.com.  Accomodation varied from elegant hotels in Barcelos and Valenca to four twin beds in a single room in a tiny town between Padron and Santiago. M also arranged luggage transport from each accommodation, so the walkers had only to carry daily essentials (food, raingear, extra layers of warmth, and first aid materials) in our backpacks.

All four of us were fit, fairly experienced hikers, and well -equipped with hiking boots, walking sticks, comfortable backpacks, and broad-brimmed hats to fend off the Iberian sun. How well did that all work? Stay tuned for a day-by-day account!

Coming soon: Day One on the Caminho

The Publishing Journey: Step 11- First Pages

From my project manager:

Hi Allyson!

I’m attaching your designed pages here. They look fantastic! This is the time to do a thorough read-through of your first pages to make sure there are no formatting issues (i.e. the chapter numbers are out of order, there are line breaks where they shouldn’t be, etc.) You may also address any typos that have been missed in previous edits. Besides formatting issues, we are only accepting typo corrections as this point. You will be charged extra if your edits exceed six pages.

Ok, here we go.

Two title pages, is that right?

Oh dear, the second title page uses the same fonts as on the cover, but here the italic script part looks awfully fancy – curlicue girly-cue. Would look right if this were a Regency romance, but not for my rather gritty New York tale.

And now for the author’s disclaimer: “This is a fictional work, and any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.” Wait, this is a historical novel! It has real historical figures in it – Augustine Palmer, James O’Neill – and they are drawn as true to life as my research could make them – this can’t be right!

Dedication to my grand-daughters – ugly spacing.

Shucks, they used the same girly-cue font for the “Chapter One” heading. It’s so fancy it’s almost illegible.

I like the way they used a little pause symbol whenever I indicated a change in time that wasn’t big enough for a new chapter – very elegant!

Aha! A line break where it shouldn’t be – just as I was warned!

Another formatting error – they missed a chapter change – here is Chapter Eight treated like a new paragraph!

How serious can they be about not making any changes in wording? Here’s a word used twice in the same paragraph – I’m sneaking in a synonym. As long as it doesn’t change the spacing or pagination it should be ok.

Oops! In an early chapter Eleanor says her son is “nearly ten” and in this later chapter he is “ten.” No birthday has been mentioned – change to “nine”.

My friend who has studied the history of the theater in New York has pointed out an error: Change “Rockefellers” to “Roosevelts”.

Some commas where they shouldn’t be; some commas missing where they should be.

Some additional word changes.

Under four pages of changes all told! But I can’t send these out as galley proofs with those two formatting errors. Hope the second round arrives quickly!

Next: the Blurb hunt continues

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